Moments in Time ( We Are)

Moments in Time ( We Are)

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
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An Etheree- Inspired by the song " Dust in The Wind"- Kansas

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dreams,         
a thought,        
emotions,       
a passing whim,      
someone's memory,     
body, mind, and spirit.    
creations of The Artist's Hand   
a small drop in life's deep ocean  
a grain of sand in vast desert land 
and sadly we are mere moments in time



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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The Etheree is such a beautiful form...
Many poets lose the emotion when writing in form poetry, but this is written and expressed with such beauty and emotion...losing nothing but gaining even more beauty in the form...
Excellent

Lynda

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"creations of The Artist's Hand
a small drop in life's deep ocean
a grain of sand in vast desert land
and sadly we are mere moments in time"

Sadly, I must disagree. For this poem is a pure treasure and something that will withstand "mere moments in time".

A beautiful poem.



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thus, we should toast each moment before it passes. A great piece. I love that song also. Kudos.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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