As It Is

As It Is

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
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Written for the "Three Letters Or Less" contest. I won't try it again!!

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It is as it is
he is for her and
you see, she is his
so, why the why? I ask
and why the old how?
for, it is as it is
two sum up to one in a vow


© 2010 Wondering Mind


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Wow! Do you realize how extraordinary this is? You have managed, in powerful brevity, to elicit emotions of such helpless inevitability that my breath catches in my throat. Saddest of all is the resignation in the last line.

You know, of course, there are no small words, as you have shown us ~ with brilliance. ;-) You had better win this contest.

Love your mind, Wondering.
j

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I'm not sure if I could pull this off but you really did the challenge justice with this writing. It is most sincere. This piece definitely shows how talented you are with writing something so flawless under strict regulation. Great Job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wow! This is sincere and so wonderful, thanks for the review.

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CLever...Few can say so much in so few words, but you are unique my friend...
Bravo!
Lynda

Posted 11 Years Ago


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You amazed me with this write, can't see why you wouldn't do the challenge again...you made it look so easy....LOL. PW

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j
Wow! Do you realize how extraordinary this is? You have managed, in powerful brevity, to elicit emotions of such helpless inevitability that my breath catches in my throat. Saddest of all is the resignation in the last line.

You know, of course, there are no small words, as you have shown us ~ with brilliance. ;-) You had better win this contest.

Love your mind, Wondering.
j

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

well done piece for a clever challenge. one suggestion...


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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