ABC Requests

ABC Requests

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
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A humble attempt, written for the Alphabet Soup contest.

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Zest my recipe with your exotic essence
Yarn me the cord of your fine quintessence
 
X-ray my heart and record my love
With you I found blissful heaven above
 
Veer from worries, leave concerns behind
Untangle the knots of my complex mind
 
Talk to me in a language unspoken before
Serenade my waves to your harbor and shore
 
Relish your want on my willing surrender
Quiet with tenderness my rolling thunder
 
Paint on my soul the colors of your dreams
Open your gates to love’s flowing streams
 
Nurture the child within this old man
Make love with me where love began
 
Lose your self with me in love’s freefall
Kiss wildly the songs of its passionate call
 
Just be free from chains and frames
Ignite with your desires all my flames
 
Hold my heart, be kind and fair
Gently embrace it with love and care
 
Forget the sorrows of days gone by
Erase the sadness sitting in your eye
 
Dive deep with me in this wild ocean
Climb high together the highest emotion
 
Bare your defenses and let my love in
Abandon misconceptions of the “Original Sin”


© 2012 Wondering Mind


Author's Note

Wondering Mind
in reverse :p

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Humble my @**! This is spectacular! Do you know what kind of talent this takes? Once again, if you did not win, the Senryu Slayer sword I keep in my sheath on my hip will be wielded.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. wow ... epic writing ...

absolutely wonderful
beautifully written
carefully received

. and the prankster in you did magic with the last line ... :) ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool poem! I love the first words that you chose to represent each letter. Very creative.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I don't know how to vote for the winner so i'll cast mine here for this one,
JohnL

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great Write. Each verse flowed into the next

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sweet i love it!!!!!! its brilliant!!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Never seen one done backwards, you really surprised me. :) thanks for joining the challenge. Much appreciated. Good luck! P.W.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent! I have never seen one done in reverse before and oh oh oh I loved it. Well done. I hope you win. This is excellent. *smile* ~Pamela

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very well done and it touches the heart! :)
Fabulous ink! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is magnificent!
I really like do you decided to go through the alphabet backwards too.
Amazing write, great description.
I really enjoyed reading this.
-E.M.R

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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