What Remains

What Remains

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

 

Sun sets over ocean blue
Waves, indifferent wave
One day less of what remains


© 2010 Wondering Mind


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I loved the motion of the poem, how it flowed, wandering and restless into the simplicity of moving and losing something. I really like this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. profound beyond measure ... we are surrounded by an engulfing "indifference" ... and it does feel like the countdown has begun ... plus ... i agree with em ...

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one day more of what's done with
another day looms
waiting for absolution

beautiful words - serene - thought provoking - brilliant! as always!

Posted 9 Years Ago


only each day

Posted 11 Years Ago


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You sure have a way with words...*Sigh* another great write. P.W.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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LIfe is short. Vision can be long, but time is always fleeting.
Beautiful expessed in brevity.
I can connect to these words for a million reasons. Well done. ~Pamela

Posted 11 Years Ago


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