Winter Theme(s)

Winter Theme(s)

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

 

Rain falls down window
I scribble your name inside
on a misty pane.
 
Wind wildly blowing
Cold shivers down my spine.
Winter is lonely
 
Snowflakes fall slowly
white covers our pathway.
The heart warms in memory.


© 2010 Wondering Mind


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this is a soft write, kinda delicate

Posted 1 Year Ago


it's exactly what winter is. even though the conditions make it lonely, the beauty of its purity brings warmth and good memories to keep us company.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Short, silent and quite unique.

I enjoyed the gentle way the picture was painted

Posted 9 Years Ago


Triples!
Nice, I also liked when you used the silent rhymes to end and start a thought again!
The more I read, the more you impress me!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very lovely poem. So much emotions showcase with such few words. Truly a gift for one to capture a moment we all have experience at at time or another. It read to me like 3 strong haiku poems put together to make 1 powerful poem. Excellent write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This speaks to me...I am a winter's child grown into Woman's Winter! I enjoy your style of writing...pulling one in while still allowing their own mind to wonder!

Posted 11 Years Ago


My, my I must return as I forgot to mention the thought of the wind and the sound of chimes clanging in the midst of the breezes, as it is one of my very favorite sounds. I think I could have a 100 different chimes tinkling, clanging, ringing, and never tire of them. They bring peace to my spirit!
So, another review. Am I allowed to do this?
If not, I will delete it.
Here's for the wind and the sound of chimes!
Sheila

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh how I love the rain, and the wind, and cold weather! The sound of rain is so soothing, and a wind howling is a sensual sound to me. The cold makes me feel alive.
You have it all in this thought provoking write.
I love the image of you writing a name in the mist on the window. That is always such a dreamy token.
....a wishing for, a longing for!
Beautiful sentiments!!
Sheila

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow - fantastic! what I liked is how you corresponds this winter image with human feelings. this ending was totally perfect. I really adored. favorite.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a beautiful depiction of winter. Also the winter images brings a memory of another time and another place. Well done.

Author: Nancy Lee Shrader

Posted 11 Years Ago



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