Poor Marvin

Poor Marvin

A Chapter by Wondering Mind


Poor Marvin,
He was ninety three years old.
Slowly, he froze in bitter cold.
I guess his neighbors were busy
                            singing a silly song.
                                    in a world that has gone so wrong
               Poor Marvin died
                       and sweet angels cried,
                                  while you were pampering egos
   proud of your loud sing-along,
             poor Marvin died.

© 2010 Wondering Mind

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. (the link didn't work for some reason) ... tragic ... truly tragic ... no words ... just sadness ...

Posted 11 Years Ago

Poor Marvin..

Posted 11 Years Ago

you have a great way with words and form, this is heartfully insightful and well defined in a subtle way that speaks the masses at heart, thanks for sharing your talent

Posted 12 Years Ago

Again, I think I am coming to love these bursts of knowledge...

Posted 12 Years Ago

Yes, a terrible thing, and all alone, no helping hand, as if he didn't exist, and life goes on. thank you for your poem, good write. God Bless

Posted 12 Years Ago

What a world we live in! Electricity turned off in a "flash", people freeze to death, without notice, without care!
It is indeed a tragedy of the dead amongst the living!
You have a kind heart to make note of it. Many will see the news, and sigh, "Oh Well!", and move on.
I have written a poem called foragers that speaks of this. I must rewrite it, and post it...you made me think of it in the archives.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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