Dreams (To the self)

 

Worry not always of what is to be

Let your dreams paint your destiny

For though the fable of fate is formed

Strokes of your brush is what you will see

 

Dream on but, don’t let it be your illusion

For dreams have worth in their conclusion

Love your dream but, drown not in surrender

And do more, more than wish as your infusion

 

Share your dreams with ones you love

Deliver kindly like the gentle dove

Share willingly in selfless compassion

For dreams are gifts from Heaven above

Reviews

[ForTheWorld]

nice poem, lovely, I enjoyed reading this, actually all of those poems. This is the very first time I wanted to finish what I had started, this book really caught my attention, It worth it...

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. sublime beyond measure ... surreal and a treasure ... this sure is the dream poem, my friend ... you always inspire ...

[Jackie Blissett]

"poor marvin" and "give peace a chance" were excellent. i think in your bio you put youself down too much. I thought both poems were srtong and provocative, with strong images and beautiful metaphors. I wasn't too keen on this one though. I thought the ryhming scheme didn't work very well, with the third line of every stanza breaking the flow. IMO. But it's good to experiment, and who knows, this might work for someone else.

Well done and best wishes
Jackie

[Michael X]

uplifting and encouraging, excellent poem to start the morning on such an aspiring note to ponder in learthearted goodness and feature, makes one to ponder dreams and life with hopeful outlook

[Gandré]

So cute this poem, lovely way to say. And, I found out: There are not many I can share my dreams with. Everybody loves to talk about their possessions, their achievements. It is frustrating. This poem is uplifting and made my Sunday.

[JohnL]

What immediately came into my mind as I read this was that we are not powerless in the hands of fate:
'For though the fable of fate is formed, Strokes of your brush is what you will see'.
You continue:
'Love your dream but, drown not in surrender and do more, more than wish as your infusion.'
These are some of the most positive and encouraging words I have ever read on the subject of dreams. I must also congratulate you on the quality of your poetic expression and construction in writing them. A pleasure - and more - a benefit to read and absorb them.
John

[Lady leah]

Very lovely i loved these lines let your dreams paint for destiny n for dreams have worth in their conclusion o so true the words you speak. loved it.

[Bella]

I truly enjoyed reading this. I especially loved the 2nd stanza. Great write!

[Hanan_Maliah]

HMMMM...have you been peeking in those corners of my mind where I tuck away all those bits of unanswered dreams? Truly though, I liked this poem...it is a gift you have with words that I find interesting!