Maybe Tomorrow

Maybe Tomorrow

A Chapter by Wondering Mind


Maybe tomorrow.,
But tomorrow never came.

Today, my skies
are painted.

Brushed skillfully grey with,
promises of your lies.
Maybe tomorrow, I tell my sorrow.

will I be the same?

© 2010 Wondering Mind

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Posted 10 Years Ago

Beautiful. Great poem

Posted 10 Years Ago

yes tomorrow
is only tomorrow

and it never comes
on time
it never comes

Posted 11 Years Ago

Nicely penned, you tell the story so often told but in a well thought-out and written manner. It speaks of being lied to and the resulting wisdom that follows. Something we either learn or we don't. Through wisdom comes caution.

Posted 11 Years Ago

How you always go so deep with just a few words...simple words ...together...forming a mindset that just explodes with feeling...causing hunger to set in for the next prolific thought!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Wwo this is amazing. I love the ryhme pattern and everything about it!! Great great job!!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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