Maybe Tomorrow

Maybe Tomorrow

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

 

Maybe tomorrow.,
But tomorrow never came.

Today, my skies
are painted.

Brushed skillfully grey with,
promises of your lies.
 
Maybe tomorrow, I tell my sorrow.


But
will I be the same?


© 2010 Wondering Mind


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maybe not

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful. Great poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


yes tomorrow
is only tomorrow

and it never comes
on time
it never comes

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nicely penned, you tell the story so often told but in a well thought-out and written manner. It speaks of being lied to and the resulting wisdom that follows. Something we either learn or we don't. Through wisdom comes caution.

Posted 10 Years Ago


How you always go so deep with just a few words...simple words ...together...forming a mindset that just explodes with feeling...causing hunger to set in for the next prolific thought!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wwo this is amazing. I love the ryhme pattern and everything about it!! Great great job!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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