Without You

Without You

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

The sun sinks slowly

into her sea of unknown.

Night sews stiff around

this sorrowing soul.


You loved sunsets.


Another day passes.


Cruel,


callous in his consumption 

of my cup of life..


But with every memory

the mind relives of you,

I am revived. Alive!

All the same


these moments mar my veins as they move

in every heart-beat

  without you.



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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the beat of my heart
aches
slow rhythms

to read words like these

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was welll writen I like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very cute and pretty pain is only halve of love and sometimes I have the right to say that's all love is you did a nice job writing this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I feel your pain here. I especially love the last stanza, very touching.

Posted 9 Years Ago


painful and beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


when the two are one, this is bound to happen...condolences

Posted 9 Years Ago


wonderful nd beautiful!
i think ti's a kind of lonely, right?
Actually, I love this poem so much!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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