Without You

Without You

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

The sun sinks slowly

into her sea of unknown.

Night sews stiff around

this sorrowing soul.

You loved sunsets.

Another day passes.


callous in his consumption 

of my cup of life..

But with every memory

the mind relives of you,

I am revived. Alive!

All the same

these moments mar my veins as they move

in every heart-beat

  without you.

© 2010 Wondering Mind

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the beat of my heart
slow rhythms

to read words like these

Posted 11 Years Ago

This was welll writen I like it

Posted 11 Years Ago

Very cute and pretty pain is only halve of love and sometimes I have the right to say that's all love is you did a nice job writing this!

Posted 11 Years Ago

I feel your pain here. I especially love the last stanza, very touching.

Posted 11 Years Ago

painful and beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago

when the two are one, this is bound to happen...condolences

Posted 11 Years Ago

wonderful nd beautiful!
i think ti's a kind of lonely, right?
Actually, I love this poem so much!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on September 29, 2010
Last Updated on October 20, 2010

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