My Winter

My Winter

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

These white streaks

of first snow

warn of my

winter years



Who knows

if there will be a New Year






drifting into

my ice age


Forever frozen

to my final fate


© 2010 Wondering Mind

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it glitters and sparkles like those icicles that hang from the eaves or the snow drifts that haven't been walked through yet . . .

Posted 12 Years Ago

it's a big wheel and it just might catch us all on the upstroke as the bells boing for another year, another chance.
with age comes warming wisdom

Posted 12 Years Ago

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hmm sounds like a winter drive ;)


I do really love how you use alliteration, it' so much fun to read.
Drifting into my ice age now there's a solitude that may not be so bad. We should ask walt disney how he fancies it so far...

Nice write!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Breathtaking imagery!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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. huh? ... i'm sorry but this is just a poem ... a brilliant image ... a brilliant array of words ... spectacular alliteration ... breathtaking and bewitching ... but we're not letting you go anywhere ... no way ... your application for "drifting into your ice age" is not approved ... :) ...

Posted 12 Years Ago

Brilliant poem WM!!

Loved every last stanza of this. Write on poet!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on October 14, 2010
Last Updated on October 22, 2010

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