Where I Want to Be

Where I Want to Be

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

When I'm without words, I just say what comes to mind


Though I may seem


at times





You really should know

I’m right here


I want to be

with you

in my heart

© 2010 Wondering Mind

Author's Note

Wondering Mind
Inspired by Emily Burns' eloquent style

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I keep coming back to these words. Because where I want to be isn't a real place, and I don't know how to get there from here. It's all so complicated and I just really feel so tired and old. You give me hope. And maybe one day I will be where I want to be.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I love these words. And to think I have a 'style'


Posted 9 Years Ago

oh, oh, did I know when I read this before that I inspired the style of it? It's really wonderful inspiring work and I'm so glad to read it again.

Posted 9 Years Ago

that's rather sweet yet subtle

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wandering, wondering minds do so well in a comfortable place, embraced, as your well chosen words convey.

Posted 9 Years Ago

subtlety to a tee. I like it

Posted 9 Years Ago

thats such a lovely song to sing.

Posted 9 Years Ago

my wife is like that (when she's without words)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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. stunning inspiration ... stunning words ... you have a beautiful mind and even more beautiful heart ... :) ...

Posted 9 Years Ago

Such romance and true, don't we often seem distant to those we love. I liked the layout and beauty behind your words.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on October 16, 2010
Last Updated on October 21, 2010

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