Once More

Endless echoes ring,

              ripple and rise,

                        ranting and raving,

                            raging into waves,

      waging war

                                                 on a serene pool of

                      ebbed emotions.

 

Faded feelings fume

                        once more

and once more

 

I pour myself

a shot

of your

memory

and drink the last

drop of daydreams I have

of you

 

With you,

I am drunk,

                       once more

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

ohh my friend ,its what happens in this poor mind everyday..the minute i wake up till i lie down..my only diversion i swear when i log on to here ,as i love and always loved literature since the been too young,and gradually i began to know that the best way to appease your troubled mind is to sit and read ..poetry i knew only here ,still its great to read anything,then you begin to think about something different not the usual worries of everyday..
lovely write..

[TAO]

I liked the flow of this one very much. And that next to last stanza was my favorite; "I pour myself a shot of your memory and drink the last drop of daydreams I have of you." Very great work.

[.]

. exquisite thought progression and exquisite poetry ... in the end, love remains ... the animosity subsides ... the beauty of it all stays ... and inspires us interminably ... beautifully written ...

[Emily B]

I sometimes get lost in memories, never wrote it as well as this though

[Ed Hart]

we are the only creature to make an art (and vengeance) of memory