Once More

Once More

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

Endless echoes ring,
              ripple and rise,
                        ranting and raving,
                            raging into waves,
      waging war
                                                 on a serene pool of
                      ebbed emotions.
 
Faded feelings fume
                        once more

and once more
 
I pour myself
a shot
of your
memory
and drink the last
drop of daydreams I have
of you
 
With you,
I am drunk,
                       once more


© 2010 Wondering Mind


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ohh my friend ,its what happens in this poor mind everyday..the minute i wake up till i lie down..my only diversion i swear when i log on to here ,as i love and always loved literature since the been too young,and gradually i began to know that the best way to appease your troubled mind is to sit and read ..poetry i knew only here ,still its great to read anything,then you begin to think about something different not the usual worries of everyday..
lovely write..

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I liked the flow of this one very much. And that next to last stanza was my favorite; "I pour myself a shot of your memory and drink the last drop of daydreams I have of you." Very great work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. exquisite thought progression and exquisite poetry ... in the end, love remains ... the animosity subsides ... the beauty of it all stays ... and inspires us interminably ... beautifully written ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I sometimes get lost in memories, never wrote it as well as this though

Posted 9 Years Ago


we are the only creature to make an art (and vengeance) of memory

Posted 9 Years Ago



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