Rain

Rain drops trickle down

Heaven cries, Earth smiles bright

Life is ironic

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

yes, life is ironic, This is really good

[FJ Davis]

Better than the old Sicilian saying that "the saints are pissing on us."
Yeah, WM, gotta throw you my vote.

[Wondering Mind]

You know, and I'm sure you do, Frank...that line would have been a perfect 7 in the 5-7-5

[Mockingbird]

brings to mind that heaven cries, raining its tears, lamenting what is happening to the earth. the earth needs rain to subsists and to bring life, perpetuating our self-destruction. how off am i?

[Pax]

wow ....
nature in simplest way...

[Alicante lullaby]

you take so much out of a simple gesture of nature...wow..

[Jasmine]

this is inspired!

[ashley]

i'm always in awe of people who can create beautiful haikus and senryus... i'm awful at them all.