Winds of Change

Winds of Change

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
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Autumn- In two Essence verses- Each verse of two lines, each line six syllables with internal and end rhymes

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trees sway to winds of change-

leaves play along the range

 

branches arch, the trees moan

naked larch rattles bones



© 2010 Wondering Mind


Author's Note

Wondering Mind
My second attempt at this ever, be kind please.

Thanks to Naked Poet for spotting a bug in the larch

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Be kind? I see not that there is a need; your work is awesome, to say the least. I'm coming to see you as...competition, now (don't take that the wrong way; my 'competition' is the means by which I am typically inspired - aside from my anger issues, that is). Very well done; short, sweet, and very pointed lesson in how much strength brevity itself can hold.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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oh!! the winds of change always stir - your poem is like watching autumn in action - at sunset! - beautiful - inspiring - spellbinding - and multi-hued!

oh - i forgot i had to be kind!!! :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. i'm so sorry but i am incapable of kindness ... but this is brilliant ... it's smooth ... like warm whiskey with ginger ... and it hits ... like a tequila shot ... beautifully vivid poetry despite immense limitations ... :) ...

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

interesting

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