Red Wine Lips

Red Wine Lips

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

Red wine and heat

mix well on your lips.


I sip slowly

 

as the candle teases

the taste in my mind


the tongue licks 

the last drop

hoping you’ll be home soon.



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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This pierced my heart with something deeper than sensual lust. The longing is pure and warm. The words hold various meanings deeper than their definition. It is an aching need for this taste of all that she is able to give you I feel. Not even the mind or the words can capture the essence that embodies her. So... enchanting and moving.

Posted 9 Years Ago


lusicious...appreciating that you would long for such a sweet sip...knowing that the taste of ones lips and the savoring is a gift of intimacy really relished...and then like licking the rim and remembering such a fine vintage and Lady...YUM!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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- i echo the 'exquisite' from serah - i could chant it - cause this is - exquisitely gripping - a lingering image - just like the red shadow of candle light - on a white wall - exquisite, indeed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


i hope she wasn't staying late at the office

Posted 9 Years Ago


Waiting for those wine lips............very sensual write.........

Posted 9 Years Ago


How are you so good at making poetry that doesn't rhyme? I guess I should practice my poetry more often =) but seriously I am jealous!! I don't even think I can helpfully critique this except by maybe from an audiences perspective. It gives off a seductive feel without being dirty...that's how smooth your poetry is =)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. whoa!!! ... wha!!! ... wow!!! ... exquisite!!! ...


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh...I'm going to have to shower after reading this! Great write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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I thought it was about a kiss, at first, but now I'm not so sure. Either way, the imagery you present is clear in the air, the flow is immaculate, and overall, another stunner for your books.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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