A Chapter by Wondering Mind

I have an odd one,

I know,


some people laugh when I show it

or maybe it’s just the shape

I don’t know

I feel as normal as anyone I know

they’re all kind.

But some still laugh when I show it.

Maybe it’s odd  these days

to show your heart.

© 2010 Wondering Mind

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Why are minds so dirty these days? I knew this was going to trip me up in the end, but my brain still went there. I think I'm in love with this book. You experiment with tremendous skill.

Posted 11 Years Ago

ya got me!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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And definitely agree with the others wasn't sure at first where this was headed, took me for a spin down a quick back road...

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is what I love about your writing...........I kept thinking "he wouldn't write about.........", and of course I melted at the end!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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What a great poem. Very misleading and I couldn't work it out till I got to then end. It was very amusing and excellently written.

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. yeah ... very few people are the odd ones out ... in today's world, we're supposed to keep it under lock and key ... and throw away the key some place we can never remember ... brilliant poem ... one of my favourites from you ...

Posted 11 Years Ago

it is odd, to some, to show your heart, I loved this write, it made me grin

Posted 11 Years Ago

Laughing at someone with a heart is as old as Adams' apple, ritualized by a Roman cohort with a crown of thorns and perpetauted by every selfish act. Great poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

LMAO. You know, I actually have a game called 'Dirty Minds'. The dirtier your mind is, the less likely you are to get the answer right. It gives clues like that with descriptions sounding like something else and they're completely innocent answers.

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What's a heart? Kidding. You know how to play with people's minds. Although, after reading some of work, I'm coming to know what to expect. Don't worry, you're really becoming predictable or anything. :) Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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