In a Dream

In a Dream

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

I had a dream


I was teasing you

at your most compassionate

of consideration,

as usual.


I should have stopped

and hugged you more often.


Why are you eating half?, you asked.


I woke up and hugged you this time,



It’s because you’re not here

© 2010 Wondering Mind

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- oh my - my heart just dropped - (not stopped) - at that last line - when i recover - i might have more to say - but for now - my dropped heart and i - shall just inhale and exhale - in the sheer magnitude - of this absence.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Absolutely brilliant!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

oh, oh

there are no words

Posted 9 Years Ago

lovely juxtaposition of messages here. Like the stepped bold/unbold to break it up

Posted 9 Years Ago

Dreams........all sorts of messages we interpretate and how beautiful you write of something that is positive.......and appreciative!

Posted 9 Years Ago

you got the big guns

Posted 9 Years Ago

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. wow ... when they're not there ... they're not there ... it's horrid ... but this is absolutely brilliant ... sheer awesomeness ... "eating half" is pure genius ...

Posted 9 Years Ago

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