In a Dream

In a Dream

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

I had a dream

 

I was teasing you

at your most compassionate

of consideration,

as usual.

 

I should have stopped

and hugged you more often.

 

Why are you eating half?, you asked.

 

I woke up and hugged you this time,

whispering,

 

It’s because you’re not here



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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- oh my - my heart just dropped - (not stopped) - at that last line - when i recover - i might have more to say - but for now - my dropped heart and i - shall just inhale and exhale - in the sheer magnitude - of this absence.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Absolutely brilliant!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


oh, oh

there are no words

Posted 10 Years Ago


lovely juxtaposition of messages here. Like the stepped bold/unbold to break it up

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dreams........all sorts of messages we interpretate and how beautiful you write of something that is positive.......and appreciative!

Posted 10 Years Ago


you got the big guns

Posted 10 Years Ago


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. wow ... when they're not there ... they're not there ... it's horrid ... but this is absolutely brilliant ... sheer awesomeness ... "eating half" is pure genius ...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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