In a Dream

In a Dream

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

I had a dream

 

I was teasing you

at your most compassionate

of consideration,

as usual.

 

I should have stopped

and hugged you more often.

 

Why are you eating half?, you asked.

 

I woke up and hugged you this time,

whispering,

 

It’s because you’re not here



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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- oh my - my heart just dropped - (not stopped) - at that last line - when i recover - i might have more to say - but for now - my dropped heart and i - shall just inhale and exhale - in the sheer magnitude - of this absence.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Absolutely brilliant!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


oh, oh

there are no words

Posted 9 Years Ago


lovely juxtaposition of messages here. Like the stepped bold/unbold to break it up

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dreams........all sorts of messages we interpretate and how beautiful you write of something that is positive.......and appreciative!

Posted 9 Years Ago


you got the big guns

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. wow ... when they're not there ... they're not there ... it's horrid ... but this is absolutely brilliant ... sheer awesomeness ... "eating half" is pure genius ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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