Time

Time

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

Time heals all wounds

 

but time is

what time is,

and in time’s apathy

 

it leaves us the scars,

the memories,

and the pain of all



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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Ah hello, your version of Time. I must say we thought very alike there. But that is what time is 'too much time can kill us'.

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Well, now I have Hootie and the Blowfish in my head to go to sleep on.

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- i've always wondered - if time stands still - and we walk past - someday - i hope to run into the answer -

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Nothing wrong with scars... Reminds us of what happened when we lost ourselves to that very same apathy, and our own breaking. Very real.

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. time doesn't do anything but tick ... but this poem is beautiful and comforting ... and sensitive ... and moving ... plus ... i agree with prof paul ...

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very beautiful. time's apathy is a fantastic pairing of words.

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The simplicity of these word will never do justice to the meaning behind them. Brilliant!

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and the grace, and the growth, and the...

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