Nights Like This

Nights Like This

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

nocturnal nuances

tease, tinge, and tint

tempting this boy inside of me

and I give in


I love it when purity plays naughty


Time can only take so much at a time

If we let it

© 2010 Wondering Mind

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Oh boy!...a tingling tease this is ...
"I love it when purity plays naughty"...yep - me too!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Your words are like a painting, each brush stroke, each word, increasing the beauty of the peice.

Posted 11 Years Ago

the wording is great...what a nice write

Posted 11 Years Ago

oh, yes

Posted 11 Years Ago

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. ohhhh ... these words sparkle like sparkling fireflies ... magical alliteration as always ... but what a thought ... enchanting beyond measure ... outstanding!!! ... you are one of the experts on time ... and we already know ... time doesn't need to tell us ...

Posted 11 Years Ago

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I love it when purity plays naughty

...What a line that is... Whoa... I'm sorry, Wondering mind, that's all I've got... Whoa... Don't get me wrong, the entire piece is awesome, but that line, that jumps out, grabs you, and just starts having its own with your mind. Well done, well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago

"Tease, tinge, tint" --try saying that 10x's fast.
I'm glad the nights your little naughty boy shows up it's subtle. When my little girl inside me surfaces, it's an explosion of colors and I have to apologize for her vibrancy later.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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