Young Lady

Young Lady

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

these white streaks,
they may remind you
of childhood snowball fights
and happy sledge rides

and home


the years
I know you can see
clear on my face

but look closer and tell me

do the days show well
the wrinkles they defined?

and if so,
do you still want to know?

© 2010 Wondering Mind

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i love this. wrinkles show a well-lived life and hold many many stories. great write! :D

Posted 10 Years Ago

there are so many stories you could tell

you will, won't you?

Posted 10 Years Ago

there's a lot hidden there!! nice thoughts

Posted 10 Years Ago

The gray hairs of experience and life. You play with words beautifully to make your point.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love this, most of line of age are from happiness and joy experienced. By the time I leave this earth I hope I have the most laugh lines, because I would have had a joy filled life. Truly an amazing poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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. wow! ... yeah ... no one wants to know ... no one cares ... it's all pointless and futile ... never been more pointless and futile ...

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on November 5, 2010
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