A Chapter by Wondering Mind

No compass or craft

this course has no conclusion

but conclusion

Polaris perished

Andromedea galloped away

Cassiopeiea has run dry

sagacious sailor succumbs

sinking in the serrate sea

his course concluded

© 2010 Wondering Mind

Author's Note

Wondering Mind
Not political at all. Just because I have PAC in the title and PAC as an embedded acrostic should not be taken as references to the state of economy or politics. I was having fun with the stars that guide.

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Very interesting an embedded acrostic poem within a poem. I never seen one before. I really like it. Very creative.

Posted 10 Years Ago

'home is the sailor, home from the sea, and the hunter home from the hill' (rls)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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. brilliantly written ...

. extremely poignant ... stars should know better ...

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Well, now that you mention it...

If he's got strong enough arms, regardless of how far he has to go, I think he can make it to shore... I'm not speaking of anything political, either.... I'm talking about Hercules... or something... olvidalo.

As if I need to say this, nice work.

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