For Me

For Me

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

For me,

never a possession.

I’m not possessive anyway.


may be I’m too sure

of the past,

or uncertain of

what tomorrow hides

 

And you’re not mine

of that I'm sure

just like my past

 

But I thank the Heavens

that you are 

for me



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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This relates a lot... so simplistic, realistic, but underneath it expands itself in a way, for me at least. Sort of like a riddle with overlapping possibilities... anyway I'm waffling/trying to explain what I can't.
Really enjoyed this, thanks. =)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Very well expressed the way you can never posses someone but they can give themselves to you. Nice work

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Stunning. In this day and age to find someone who loves likes this seems much more rare. This is a beautiful expression of what should be... :)






BAM!!!!!!

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. ahhh ... beautiful ... and immensely poignant too ...


Posted 9 Years Ago


Dear Wondering Mind,

Very nice. Simple. Straightforward. People cannot be possessed, but a person can give themselves to another.

Nicely written.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh this is so sweet. The best form of love. Wonderful expression.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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