For Me

For Me

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

For me,

never a possession.

I’m not possessive anyway.


may be I’m too sure

of the past,

or uncertain of

what tomorrow hides

 

And you’re not mine

of that I'm sure

just like my past

 

But I thank the Heavens

that you are 

for me



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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This relates a lot... so simplistic, realistic, but underneath it expands itself in a way, for me at least. Sort of like a riddle with overlapping possibilities... anyway I'm waffling/trying to explain what I can't.
Really enjoyed this, thanks. =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Very well expressed the way you can never posses someone but they can give themselves to you. Nice work

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Stunning. In this day and age to find someone who loves likes this seems much more rare. This is a beautiful expression of what should be... :)






BAM!!!!!!

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. ahhh ... beautiful ... and immensely poignant too ...


Posted 10 Years Ago


Dear Wondering Mind,

Very nice. Simple. Straightforward. People cannot be possessed, but a person can give themselves to another.

Nicely written.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 10 Years Ago


Oh this is so sweet. The best form of love. Wonderful expression.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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