Rain Down

Rain Down

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

It’s hard to 

pickup the pieces

when it’s so windy

 

I wish it would rain

 

may be then


they’d settle

or flow

or just ease into earth

 

It’s just so hard when it’s windy


© 2010 Wondering Mind


Author's Note

Wondering Mind
Phil Collins- I wish it would rain down

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try harder, WM. rain isn't predicted to fall until next week.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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- the wind - yea - it always does a good job scattering those scattered pieces even further - this is a masterpiece - i agree with serah - there's isn't much more to say - except a quiet prayer - for some gentle rain -

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this, I really just bloody love this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. ohhh myyyy ... this ... now is a masterpiece ... profound beyond measure ... beautiful beyond measure ... overwhelming ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Yes music inspires...
This poem could fit into so many situations... I like it :)


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