Torn in Love

Torn in Love

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

It is not torment

that tears

this heart

 

I admit

 

I am worse at love

than I am

at not

 

a man,

like many


cannot contain

patiently

the pain of birth

and nurture it


close to the heart



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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W.M. superbly written with great depth saying much. Very honest and refreshing from a man who is very in touch with his feelings. Wonderful!

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. yeah ... true that ... men are usually flinchers ... but you are an exception, oh wondering mind ... a rather exceptional exception ... boy are we blessed that you are ...

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- no - that's not torment - its beyond - miles, light years beyond -

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of course he can

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revealing honesty ~

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