Torn in Love

It is not torment

that tears

this heart

 

I admit

 

I am worse at love

than I am

at not

 

a man,

like many

cannot contain

patiently

the pain of birth

and nurture it

close to the heart

Reviews

[Helena]

W.M. superbly written with great depth saying much. Very honest and refreshing from a man who is very in touch with his feelings. Wonderful!

[.]

. yeah ... true that ... men are usually flinchers ... but you are an exception, oh wondering mind ... a rather exceptional exception ... boy are we blessed that you are ...

[em]

- no - that's not torment - its beyond - miles, light years beyond -

[Ed Hart]

of course he can

[Robin]

revealing honesty ~