Love's Pen

Love's Pen

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

I will not render

sweet nothings

on the pelt

of your heart

 

These, 

I leave willingly 

to this

and that

 

My love pen

pierces passionate

penetrating

deep

drawing the ink

from love’s well

 

I will write

but

are you sure

you can recite?



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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No need to recite. Just let it flow and carry you to the deepest of cisterns until the well runs dry. Such passion these days, WM. Lovin' it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


excellent sexual connotations... haha
once again, you write exceptionally well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A poem most sensually deep, a lovers heart to reach, a rythem that gently rocks, i do believe the recitation is sure to come

Posted 10 Years Ago


dude that rocks.. i love this poem.. the flow was outstanding

Posted 10 Years Ago


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. my goodness ...

you speak my soul
and etch on it
i reach my goal
bit by bit

. this is quite the rocket write ... plus ... i agree with em ...

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's very romantic poem to me. Very sweet poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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No, they can't. Why? Because they have no idea what you're saying. At least, that's how it often feels. Well done, Wondering Mind.

Posted 10 Years Ago


My thoughts turn to love letters handwritten and scented from times long past and proper. I like the way you stimulate a mood by writing style alone.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I LOVE THE MEANING OF THIS POEM!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really love~ "my love pen pierces passionate penetrating drawing the ink from love's well" The entire poem was lovely!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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