My Elements

My Elements

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

what halo did

presumption

point to, in praise

of my sainthood?

 

 

I am all of Earth’s

passion made,

man molded

time taint

 

free as blowing winds

fresh as running streams

fierce as fire’s flames



a simple man

no angel,

no saint



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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Pax
just wow....

Posted 8 Years Ago


"Simple Perfection"

Posted 8 Years Ago



"free as blowing winds
fresh as running streams
fierce as fire’s flames"~ I love the rhythmic flow of this stanza, along with the powerful statement made...This piece is Strong and passionate indeed!





Posted 8 Years Ago


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It still amazes me how simple and thoughtful your poems are.
No need to write anything that doesn't have to be there.

BAM!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. haha! ... ohhhhhhhhh ... well, genius lies in simplicity ... so, are you claiming to be a genius ? ... gotcha ! ... :P ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


its an open mind that earns you wings

Posted 9 Years Ago


You're your own special blend of man.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I shall live to imitate your humility. Or is the vanity using reverse psychology? Hmm...

Posted 9 Years Ago


neither - only human.

(absolutely love this by the way!)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Just a man perhaps, with a free flowing mind.

Enjoyed so much, im learning thank you

Posted 9 Years Ago



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