Ready, Steady, Go!

Tyburn- first attempt

Eddy

Heady

Steady

Ready

Life is eddy, and heady you grow

Breathe in steady, get ready now, go!

Author's Note

A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables.The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. The last two lines rhyme and incorporate
the first, second, third, and fourth lines as the 5th through 6th lines.

Reviews

[luciddreamer]

Wow...I like this.....
Peace
Robin

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. brilliant ... am gonna attempt one too ... and what are you waiting for ? ... write some more ... go ! ... get to work ...

[Vyctm]

??? I don't like the setup of this poem. It makes a finished work seem incomplete. I can't say I particularly liked it, but i didn't hate it.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

WAY TO GO! GREAT POEM!

[Sheila Kline]

Wow, a lot to keep up with, and you did it!! Good job!!