Your Naught,  My Nothing

Your Naught, My Nothing

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

confused, still

at sixes and sevens

it’s yours

for naught


It may add up to

nothing for me

but at least


I tried



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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your ways don't make any sense to anyone but yourself 'but at least i tried.' it's your loss.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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em
there are some nothings
that add up to a lot more
naught knows not the sum

Posted 11 Years Ago


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:)
Sigh... lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


How will you know if you don't try? Great poem. You at least made an attempt.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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trial and error
is the story of my life
naught notwithstanding

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the brevity of this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nothing ever adds up to nothing...there's always something to take away from everything... (tell me you understand what I'm saying here?!)

Posted 11 Years Ago


i cant write stuff like this i hate you lol i dont really.. its a really neat poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


I wish i could write like this, with so few words that say so much, you succeeded

Posted 11 Years Ago



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