Your Naught,  My Nothing

Your Naught, My Nothing

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

confused, still

at sixes and sevens

it’s yours

for naught


It may add up to

nothing for me

but at least


I tried



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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your ways don't make any sense to anyone but yourself 'but at least i tried.' it's your loss.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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em
there are some nothings
that add up to a lot more
naught knows not the sum

Posted 9 Years Ago


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:)
Sigh... lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


How will you know if you don't try? Great poem. You at least made an attempt.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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trial and error
is the story of my life
naught notwithstanding

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the brevity of this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nothing ever adds up to nothing...there's always something to take away from everything... (tell me you understand what I'm saying here?!)

Posted 9 Years Ago


i cant write stuff like this i hate you lol i dont really.. its a really neat poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


I wish i could write like this, with so few words that say so much, you succeeded

Posted 9 Years Ago



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