A Chapter by Wondering Mind

words cold

find no meaning

in my mind


blood runs hot

in the heart


this flock

of words

will now fly

to warmer sky

© 2012 Wondering Mind

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i guess words have no meaning and cold until you put passion into it. the words are there they just need to be put into verse.

Posted 9 Years Ago

this could be looked at in many ways.

Posted 10 Years Ago

An intriguing concept and your use of temperature works wonderfully...
I can admit that the specific meaning escapes me, but you've certainly triggered an emotional response in me which is what poetry is all about.
Thank you, and well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very nice image you create here.

Posted 10 Years Ago

this is lovely, i love the poem so much =D..you're really an amazing writer.. =D

Posted 10 Years Ago

This was beautiful! i liked it!

Posted 10 Years Ago

I like this.

Posted 10 Years Ago

And I am the wind beneath your wings ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago

wonderful... warmth will come again. we just need to wait a while.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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This is beautiful :)

And so let it fly and this to pass :)

You are such a wonderful writer, I hope you know... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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