Flocking

Flocking

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

words cold

find no meaning

in my mind

 

blood runs hot

in the heart

and

this flock

of words

will now fly



to warmer sky



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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i guess words have no meaning and cold until you put passion into it. the words are there they just need to be put into verse.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this could be looked at in many ways.

Posted 9 Years Ago


An intriguing concept and your use of temperature works wonderfully...
I can admit that the specific meaning escapes me, but you've certainly triggered an emotional response in me which is what poetry is all about.
Thank you, and well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice image you create here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is lovely, i love the poem so much =D..you're really an amazing writer.. =D

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was beautiful! i liked it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


And I am the wind beneath your wings ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


wonderful... warmth will come again. we just need to wait a while.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is beautiful :)

And so let it fly and this to pass :)

You are such a wonderful writer, I hope you know... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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