My Crimes, Your Judgement

My Crimes, Your Judgement

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

You judge me,

so what’s new?

 

I always knew.

 

Reading your past,

I’m not your first,

and I sure won’t be your last.

 

But between my crimes

and your judgement,

at least mine

have been consistent.



© 2011 Wondering Mind


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we all have skeletons in the closet, which eventually come out. sometimes we don't wish to see the other's skeletons because their own secrets don't warrant their judgement on our own. i hate hypocrisy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Pax
nice one..
a crime is consistent...

Posted 8 Years Ago


consistency is the key, my friend... or is it?

Posted 9 Years Ago


great rhyme pattern. the last stanza, humorous.

Posted 9 Years Ago


there is something compelling about the shortness and simpleness of the lines. they echo bitterness and triumph and cynicism all at once. an intriguing write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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