Too Soon

Too Soon

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

First love blues

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lovely language longs
to find a style
while lexicon loiters a while
yet  the mind finds none
and wonders anon

 

then summons all
that which memory lends

 

sweet sunset surrenders
the mysteries of mistress Moon

Sol's firey rise of dawn
a walk in the park
on a Sunday afternoon

 

and
all that went too soon



© 2012 Wondering Mind


Author's Note

Wondering Mind
semi- rhyme, if there is a such a thing

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nice thoughts and images. enjoyed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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well, dangit -- for me, poetry enforces no boundaries nor concrete requirements ... it simply marches to its own drummer.

and one of the saddest realities of first love is that it is only the beginning ...

skillfully/abstractly expressed. you are a wonder to me.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Captivating. Love it 👍

Posted 8 Years Ago


sweet sunset surrenders
the mysteries of mistress Moon
My favorite lines!
Beautiful poem.


Posted 8 Years Ago


:) well done.. keep it up :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice style. flowed well. a gem. thanks.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful! I love the feeling of your poem :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the texture and feel of this piece. It's beautiful and the words you used painted such a lovely imagine. Wonderfully done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love the whimsical feel of this Ethereal piece!!

"sweet sunset surrenders
the mysteries of mistress Moon
Sol's firey rise of dawn
a walk in the park
on a Sunday afternoon"~ I'm in love with this Stanza... a flame is lit within this imagery! Lovely write!




Posted 8 Years Ago


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ah, love, romance, song...a walk in the park

Posted 8 Years Ago



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