Lost-Me

Lost-Me

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

Sand dance

"

lost

on occasion

without obvious occasion

I seem to                             find

no words

To find

the reasons

why I can’t write

 

but then

            I see snake- sand

crawl-dance and              winde

to silent wind songs

      on beds  barren

of high-wayed desert land

then a thought,

a memory,

an emotion

lands

and finds

me



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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Very effective, in both content and format.
"To find the reasons I can't write..." That's an all-too-familiar preoccupation.
It's for certain that Writer's Block is right down there on Lonely Street.
From what I can see, WM, it came back to you, in big way!


Posted 8 Years Ago


 Love the format you gave this! It calls a desire to find what is not yet seen to us as you so vividly show in these verses.
"crawl-dance and              winde
to silent wind songs"
I am glad you had a "remembering"!
Awesome! ~ :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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wow..jumbled words...my kind of favorite style....
its really hard when we felt that we cant write a thing..then suddenly nature gives hints for us...wonderful write my friend...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow!... You have found your words!
What a wonderful wordplay you have discovered, as you ponder on writers' block... so cool to see this momentarily evolve into sheer brilliancy! Very cool indeed! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nature is a wonder...snake sand..what a delicious way to unclog the mind ! ...we have dunes which I have traversed and camped before..in my mind "snake sand" is when the wind blows across the sand leaving those wavy lines upon the dunes...is this the sight you write of?

Posted 8 Years Ago


very nice. I enjoyed this a lot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It is often that something good comes from a wandering mind.

Posted 8 Years Ago


yes, that's certainly the way of it

Posted 8 Years Ago



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