In Charity

In Charity

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

They know, I feel...I mean I think

"

when language deprives

emotion of expression

and notion of nuance

as it sometimes, often does

 

I play a game with words

and let them catch my meaning

and write my song

 

I have a feeling

sometimes

 

they know I’m  

a destitute child

and in charity

just play along



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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Wordplay is unique to each of us..it pulls those inner strings and unravels into mysterious writings but we know..we always smile at the musings of the wordplay :) xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so cleverly written, I love this!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


aw I liked the idea behind this a lot. I liked the feeling of all this. Great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"when language deprives
emotion of expression" ~It often does get deprived when we are unable to express ourselves fluently. However, your wordplay makes it an alluring game for my mind to decipher...It's short and sweet, yet fully expressed, and fun to play (not charity at all)...very clever.




Posted 8 Years Ago


Words play well... or a sign that says' "Words at Play" ..that would be fun lol.. Well written. I love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


games of words - seems to be a local phenomenon today :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a fine poem that says a lot in a few powerful lines, good writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


( : Tricky one you are..love this one! At least in my twisted mind It works q :

Posted 8 Years Ago


i know the current in this river

Posted 8 Years Ago


Not quite sure I understand dear .. ... I tried ..


Jasmine :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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