Mermaid

Mermaid

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

A glimpse....

"

the mind moving
in aqua-flow
poetry

 

in open waters
I dived to see
her deep sea


a child’s memory
           a fairytale
            a song of sweet
               innocent history

 

a glimpse
she’s gone

 

I faintly heard
the sea-bed called

her name



© 2012 Wondering Mind


Author's Note

Wondering Mind
A tribute

My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Reviews

A wonderful tribute.. :) The magic, wonder and beauty of the mermaid is never forgotten..x

Posted 11 Years Ago


as a boy i saw a mermaid upon a soothing sea
she flashed her eyes and cast a wave to me
i have not forgotten as i walk along life's shore
so i nod into your tribute, as the raven says 'no more'

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the flow and feel of this poem.
Like almost catching a glimpse out of the corner of your eye... but not quite. Very well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Magical, mysterious and lovely!
Mermaids everywhere now whisper your name--if they know it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Pax
very beautiful and magical. nice work my friend

Posted 11 Years Ago


You have an innate way of penning your clever work of art! I love your style of writing, and how you have crafted such refreshing pieces... This has a wonderful flow, and such a sweet tribute it is! I love it!~xo~ :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

147 Views
6 Reviews
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on June 2, 2012
Last Updated on June 6, 2012





Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5