Treats

Treats

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

more than sweetness implied

"

despite the years
Time’s tainting trifles

 

and


my many times-over
“been there, done that”

 

the heart
still misses a beat
at your treats



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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That is a beautiful poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


great title, beautiful poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


And this is a.. gOOd ThAnG ! ( ;

Posted 8 Years Ago


oh, oh . . .

Posted 8 Years Ago


For your sake--and, no doubt, to the utter delight of that particular object of your affections (here, perhaps, confections)--I am more than pleased at the rebirth of your amorous fervency. It made for a light and lovely bit of work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Pax
short but has deeper meaning, the idea about time, sad and happy treats in moments we remember in time's passing. wonderful write my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Although "more than sweetness is implied", this is very sweet.... To have "been there, done that", and still have the heart feel that way is wonderful!... Nice write!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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