A Chapter by Wondering Mind

in poetry


eyes danced


your rhyme


did you feel me?


that breeze

on the back

of your neck

a peck

sighs of my soul

at your beauty

© 2012 Wondering Mind

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Stunning! Beautifully penned my friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Softly sighing @ the beauty of this piece..

Posted 9 Years Ago

damn, i thought it was one of the chicks

Posted 9 Years Ago

Ahhh .. sweet ..

Softly Done .. Jazz

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like how you made this simple quiet poem feel. The softness of it gives the feeling of whispers almost heard.
Well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago

a poem doesnt get any better than this, it has all the elements...the personal loving touch that speak to each reader as if it is meant for them, and the sensuality...just enough to stroke a tired mind...then comes the sound in your use of the word sigh...leading us right to the source of your big old heart. loved it. enjoyed.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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signs and chances. wonderful.

Posted 9 Years Ago

What a lovely thought...the breeze was felt, and my soul sighs... This is mesmerizing piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I believed, she did because she felt it as well.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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