Dare

We all die in the end

I will not ponder

over the consequences

much

 

though the mind wonders

 

still

the heart beats

in belief

 

that those

who dare win

 

or

die trying

Reviews

[Circe]

profound piece, really love the way it unraveled, the idea and the message itself is very powerful.

[Renée]

As I read this piece...it reminds me of the thoughts.. that run though a mind.. as you "gear up" for a ride...

[Pax]

our mind wonders in the fast beats of our heart
will this be the end or we will die trying.
wonderful write my friend.

[paul]

'die trying' or
try dying,
death waits for us all

[Katrina Mckeown]

well pennned thought provoking piece!

[J. J. Nightingale]

?? ....

J

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is truly inspiring... Dare to dare...go for it! Live the dream, "or die trying". Great write!