A Pebble

A Pebble

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

or less


don’t over estimate



may mislead
on the surface



a pebble
too soon will sink



the gravity
of reality

© 2012 Wondering Mind

Author's Note

Wondering Mind
too many pebbles sink to the bottom

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Ain't it the truth!
Metaphorical applications abound.
"...underestimating the gravity of reality."

Posted 9 Years Ago

nothing is ever what it seems. perhaps the pebbles are our rationalizations of our choices and actions we make to ourselves but know ourselves we've made the wrong choices and they will come back to haunt us. very thought provoking because interpretation seems elusive to me. you know i always have to know about
everything, i'm that neurotic : )

Posted 9 Years Ago

Life has it's battles that's for sure ~ We just have to stay strong and fight to stay alive.. very well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago

I agree with all the reviews below, this was cleverly done, and the ending was powerful. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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wow, this is deep made me think. and a powerful ending. great write my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I love skipping rocks on water..they always leave rings as they skip along..and they always sink..humm interesting ..is it about the pebble or the one who puts the pebble into action ?

Posted 9 Years Ago

Life always seems to exact its toll The truth is nature cares not who we are.It indiscriminately takes out aLL BUT THE STRONGEST

Posted 9 Years Ago

Pretty deep my friend indeed ripples can start the most meaningful changes the soft touch works and a hard throw just sinks.

Posted 9 Years Ago

True .. Good One ..

Jazz ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago

ah, weiqui pebbles!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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