A Chapter by Wondering Mind

in life


no remorse


a lesson learned
of course
that maybe I'm human

I have learned



is a lame


when the

student is


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I like this alot, i can and i know alot of others can relate to this...." a lesson learned of course that maybe i'm human" is the best line love it.... keep on keeping... can't wait to read more of your work.. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

This sounds like someone I know, I am always getting into trouble I don't really mean to cause, But I think subconsciously the little devil in me wants to see me squirm :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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9 Years Ago

Somehow, we’re all related. It’s in the genes, right back to that other son of Adam..Some of us .. read more

9 Years Ago

lol, somehow I don't think that was a typo, but i'll let you slide with it cause I really can't disc.. read more
perhaps for one who is mischievous there is no regret; that's why they're mischievous. i think that regret can be gotten over whereas remorse cannot.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Isn't that the truth! I like your self appreciative recriminations in this one, true so true, especially if the student enjoys being mischievous! this was great :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Regret is a refutation of the manner in which you, most likely, had to learn something. Decidedly unproductive.
As you imply, "mischievous" students are often merely in the process of teaching themselves.
Valuable counsel, WM!--poetically pronounced.

Posted 9 Years Ago

You're in top nth percentile as a poet on this site. Really.

Posted 9 Years Ago

lol Yes! regret has no chance of bringing order to the mischievous in our nature! A great lesson to learn, me thinks!lol You do have a way with words. A pleasure to read them. smiling at you, Tai

Posted 9 Years Ago

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i really like this line: regret is a lame teacher :D
life as it is, we have mistakes, then lesson learned and regret will take its toll later. great write.

Posted 9 Years Ago

lots to think about here, I love 'regret is a lame teacher' Great line....I myself have no lame teachers...Good stuff

Posted 9 Years Ago

the last stanza is kinda funny. I like the thought and idea in this piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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