Carnal Dance

Carnal Dance

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

Some for some

"

what friend

where

 

would  dance away
the wanton
hours of this night

 

with me

 

that I may

sweat off

these heated
carnal fluids?



© 2012 Wondering Mind


My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Reviews

sounds like the person is backed up and needs to let it out. is in need of some friend with benefits or a one night stand.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Well, what does one say to that I'm at a lost for words, although have a lot of thoughts spinning around in my head but not for publication! Very sensuous, well that's one thought! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

I shall say no more!! Except thank you again :)
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
...
Lmao at eating pineapple :))) Good poem, wandering

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

Thank you ma'am :)
Maybe they would have to be more than a friend .. .. I am sure you would not have to look very far for a willing soul ...lol ... Enjoy !

Jazz :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

Thank you Jazz :)
i think you need to sweeten up the offer a little bit

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

lol…I suppose eating pineapple doesn’t count?
The heated dance can be very passionate... sweating is great for the complexion, leaves a great afterglow. ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

I'll have to make use of "afterglow" in some of my attempts at writing :)
Robbie~xoxo~

8 Years Ago

Looking forward to it....I may have to respond to that. ;)

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

643 Views
6 Reviews
Added on July 2, 2012
Last Updated on July 3, 2012

The Book of Experi-Mentals


Author

Wondering Mind
Wondering Mind

Canada



About
more..

Writing