"Broken Vow"

What if he broke his lifetime promise?"

Wear this invisible thread -- as his vow;

For her -- a sign of an undying love.

A couple on crossed-fingers -- not to bow;

Figure of love and peace -- fly high white dove!

What if this knotted strand is let go?

On the right side -- unravel, uncoiled.

The thread, from perfectly bind -- is undo.

Yet, on the other edge -- still on hold;

Where the dove goes to? -- Its way goes blurry;

With the said vows -- flee in the winding road.

Where to find the route -- the sight couldn’t see;

If the only thread connects them -- severed?

Couple’s oath -- yet only one -- does not bend;

He belies his pledge -- “Till the very end.”

Author's Note

For those who believed in a promise, that is meant to be broken..
Hope you like this..
:-)

Reviews

[Confuser]

Suji Davie, I did like it very much indeed; Where the dove goes to?....flee in the winding road. The dove is wonderful as a metaphor; the ending slammer. Thank you. Love is so sad, sometimes. Thank you.

[Gee]

Witnessing this at the moment with 2 long standing marriages of friends falling apart at the seams due to the infidelity of one partner.Nice poem

[RONGORONGO::^/JEUSSEN/F..]

He probably cheated on her with some dumb, ugly wretched beast with no morals because she knew he was taken. So as for their vows, HE broke them.

[Rache David]

You feel it.. right? You're emotions kinda overflowing.. :-)

[RONGORONGO::^/JEUSSEN/FUNKSPEILS/SCR-67]

No offense (again) but I was actually trying to help you. Your poem was crying out you need it, so my review was actually based on YOUR overflowing emotions. I am just the reader giving you a probable scenario. You should get out of that relationship. This guy sounds like a bad man that just uses every person he ever meets in his life. So if he's a !@#%^%*&..........., then you're wasting your time. Stick with good people around you and you'll never know hurt. At least not where actual real LOVE is concerned. LOVE IS SUPPOSED TO MAKE YOU FEEL GOOD.

[Rache David]

Thanks for that.. but I'm not talking about myself in that poem. It's general.. no specific person..