Two Souls

two souls searching in the night

two wrongs dosen`t make a right

 

but your searching for solace

where there is none to find

 

your paths cross your hearts meet

your eyes are blind you enter

with in one another

 

your hearts entwine

you become as one

 

your souls make love

the solace you find

 

fate is wonderful

love is blind

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

"Fate is wonderful, love is blind." I loved it!

[wordman]

hey when your ugly like me love must be blind lol thanks

[AaronFreitas]

Ugly... I saw pure handsome... it's the beautiful mind that counts... that what I keep telling myself haha

[wordman]

i read somewhere today where you was smoking and drinking

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Sweet and romantic piece top to bottom:).
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

thank you james

[Tom]

Blissfully romantic and the ending perfect, a real heart-melter, tear-jerker if ever I read one !

[wordman]

yeah it is a tear jerker,lol thanks

[Valentine]

A very sweet write. I liked it very much..Kathie

[wordman]

thank you for the visit kathie

[Terrence Chang]

Nice writing and nice choice of song

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Terrence Chang]

It was my pleasure

[B.J]

Lovely fit for a hallmark card

[wordman]

lol good to know I can always get a job writing cards

[B.J]

Lol hahahha:)............................

[wordman]

glad to see you back,

[B.J]

Not fully yet but getting there

[wordman]

looking forward to a write

[Woody]

exquisite! before the eyes can perceive anything, the souls merge together in a beautiful sserenade. that's my idea of true love.
absolutely beautiful.

[wordman]

thank you woody for the visit

[Tiana]

Beautifully blending of two souls so wonderfully penned, Ron :)

[wordman]

thanks tiana,the more I read it the better I like it when I write they come fast and I really don`t read and after I post with music they change

[Tiana]

you are so welcome! Shows how confident you are as a writer :) Kenny G's music are simply beautiful. Gotta love that sexy sax :))

[wordman]

some people on this site doesn't like Kenny g but I do

[Tiana]

oh I do too, Ron ... He is one of my favorites :)

[Laura Lynn]

I never loved Kenny G until now. I love what you say, it sounds so real and true, the way hearts agree and beat as one,

[wordman]

of course it`s true it`s always the attraction.thank you for reading