Touch you Touch me

Touch you Touch me

A Poem by wordman
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I have touched your soul

and you have touched mine

and we will be together forever

if only in our minds

 

Two souls meeting in the night

two wrongs don't make a right

but our hearts locked

and our souls entwined

 

We danced in the stars

solace we can find

so forever we shall always be

because i touched you

and you touched me...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2017 wordman


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a true miracle when such things happen un-looked for ... the closing is endearing and warm ...a good feeling that brings a smile to my face
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

glad you liked it e
Just beautiful- like they say- how do you go back to being strangers after seeing someone’s soul- beautiful- when that special connection happens only us ourselves can know and feel the depth that remains always- excellent write🌹

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you very much
"Touch you touch me"
wordman,
People touch one another all the time.
We are designed to have an impact on
others and they on us; continual ripples
moving, changing. This poem seemed a
thought of something which may of start-
ed out a little rough but there was some
good, some warmth, something to remember:
"Two souls meeting in the night
two wrongs don't make a right
but our hearts locked
and our souls entwined"
I was not sure about this one part but the con-
text of the poem is strong and shows a recog-
nition of acceptance of love, of healthy and
vibrant commonality. When something is
healthy it needs to be protected as in:
"We danced in the stars
solace we can find
so forever we shall always be
because I touched you
and you touched me..."
Blessings
Kathy

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you kathy
Yes, I truly feel that. That was lovely.

Posted 3 Years Ago


 wordman

3 Years Ago

thank you for the visit !
"We danced in the stars."
Lovely piece, enjoyed reading. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


 wordman

3 Years Ago

you went way back,thank you !
Left me with a daydreamy sort of vibe mixed with a little bit of uncertainty. Nice combo, made for a pretty little read. :) I have to agree with another reviewer who said that their favorite line was "we danced in the stars". It's a nice piece of imagery in this poem, which I think should eventually be made into a song.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you kitty .
Favorite line "we danced in the stars".....pretty poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

yes that would be your favorite,you love the flair
lovely brevity! the reader can feel the beauty and longing for love! well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you my friend
Indra Neil

5 Years Ago

You are most welcome!
Very lovely! Romantic with a bit of sadness and longing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you again,your sweet

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