Touch you Touch me

I have touched your soul

and you have touched mine

and we will be together forever

if only in our minds

 

Two souls meeting in the night

two wrongs don't make a right

but our hearts locked

and our souls entwined

 

We danced in the stars

solace we can find

so forever we shall always be

because i touched you

and you touched me...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

This is beautiful!
It reminds me of the one I love :)

[wordman]

thank you,thats what it`s supposed to do

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!! :)

[andrew mitchell]

What a treat! Lovely poem really touching. thanks for sharing! "Our souls entwined" magic words!

[wordman]

thank you Andrew for the visit

[nazia]

True Soul mates...... the way you touched each other's heart is so passionate. the warmth of your love flows throughout the poem and spreads all around.. :)

[wordman]

thank you,i appreciate your visits

[W R Stowe]

Very,very sweet description of the truest sense of love at first sight.We sometimes can go a lifetime and never really find true love.It took me over 40 years to really find it,or should I say for it to find me.My wife showed me how love is meant to be cause she loves me by action and not words.Funny of how many times I had fallen in lust thinking it was love.Nice job Wordman

Bill

[wordman]

bill you are so right,and I thank you

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome

bill

[ANTO]

Such meetings of souls must surely be recorded in the mists of time for eternity wordman. This is a fine dedication to love that once was and may be again
I enjoyed this very much my friend.
:)

[ANTO]

Such meetings of souls must surely be recorded in the mists of time for eternity wordman. This is a fine dedication to love that once was and may be again
I enjoyed this very much my friend.
:)

[wordman]

I appreciate your visit

[Arthur Henn]

The video of still pictures of old Iron Horse. And music used fits the writing perfectly! This writing encompasses all of nature's lining of four-seasons locked in that quiet place of mind.

[wordman]

I appreciate your review

[writing mojo]

a touching poem which envelops the reader into the metaphysics of being one with mind and soul in fleshed courtship of human being ..good one

[wordman]

and I thank you,mojo

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souldancing, what a lovely beat :)

[wordman]

thank you lynn,nice to see you

[Woody]

chemistry at work I suppose. how else can one explain it? I have touched your soul and you have touched mine.
nothing like falling in love and you have described it so well, wordman.

[wordman]

and I appreciate your comment, woody