Rose Garden

Rose Garden

A Poem by wordman





Before the day
breaks through the night
the dew falls and glistens
in the light.

It waters the roses
in my garden so rare
only beauty will you find in there

It`s a special place
down in my soul
where no one else can ever go

Only I can trod that ground
it`s a place
no one else ever found...

© 2020 wordman


Author's Note

 wordman
you know when I wrote this piece I really didn't know what it was about
after reading comments from all sites I really thought about it and this is what I discovered.the rose garden is a metaphor of course it is my inner soul life waters my soul
but the person on the outside and the one on the inside are totally differen`t I don`t show the inside openly and people really don`t know me...

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'Rose Garden'
wordman,
Fragrance from the garden of our lives. Is it watered, cared for? Gentle care, for the new shoots but before they come forth there must be a strong prune. Life is like that. We respond to the challenges and can become stronger.
Beautifully done.
Kathy

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you kathy,,happy valentines
Kathy Van Kurin

2 Years Ago

Thanks Ron,
a lovely valentines day to you as well.
4.th place in trees and flowers contest 5-8-16

Posted 5 Years Ago


I think we all have our inner gardens, but no two like the same, just as we are not the same. None can really ever see every part of our hearts and souls. I think sometimes we as writers reveal more than we think we do, but the interpretation is what matters. Lovely Ron.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you !
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How did I miss this one??? I love it, It's lyrical and deep and passionate...beautiful! One of my favorites of yours :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

well i`m glad you found it,glad your back !
...

5 Years Ago

:) I was away for a few days. I'm glad I found it too!
this is so beautiful, wordman. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you very much !
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

5 Years Ago

welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice piece of work friend, your authors note definitely puts
this piece into perspective:)
I believe most of us have sides to us that most don't know
and sometimes we don't even know:(
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

thank you jame,i appreciate your review
I beg your pardon but that was a nice poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

did the post,or the times pick it up,thank you
Can we really ever know another?....and I do think we have some glimpse into your soul through your poetry...another job well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

thank you so much

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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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