Rose Garden

Before the day
breaks through the night
the dew falls and glistens
in the light.

It waters the roses
in my garden so rare
only beauty will you find in there

It`s a special place
down in my soul
where no one else can ever go

Only I can trod that ground
it`s a place
no one else ever found...

Author's Note

you know when I wrote this piece I really didn't know what it was about
after reading comments from all sites I really thought about it and this is what I discovered.the rose garden is a metaphor of course it is my inner soul life waters my soul
but the person on the outside and the one on the inside are totally differen`t I don`t show the inside openly and people really don`t know me...

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Sublime and romantic expression from the heart of your soul. The music is a perfect accompaniment to your words.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[MomzillaNC]

yw :D

[Confuser]

Let's don't complicate it wordman, (I do that), it is simply beautiful and I love it. That secret place, those beautiful red roses of love and life, that red color does reflect love, life and so much more. The thing is darn opulent, delightful, full of grace, and I love, love love it! Well done. Great writing. You must know. Thank you. Dale

[wordman]

well I can write other things beside silly love poems,thank you

[Confuser]

I never promised you a rose garden, sir. Hehehe....great writing. I know you are a great writer.

[wordman]

thank you dale,

[Confuser]

Y/W....hey when you feel better let's write about Ted Nuggent! LOL Seriously, you must know you write well. Change of subject: If you like startrek, read, Anto, Tribble for Trouble. anyway...you'll laugh....we hope you feel better.

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

You really depicted nature's clarion call and the beauty of unconterminated soul. Very well thought out. Well written.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit, didn't really plan it that way
but that's the road it took

[Justin]

this is beautiful man....

[wordman]

thank you Justin, I appreciate your visit

[ANTO]

The last safe refuge in a world (or outside a world) where all refuge is being eradicated by noise - emotional, physical or otherwise wordman.
It sounds like a wonderful place and I hope you find the path to it open when required.
I liked this a lot. :)

[wordman]

I appreciate your visit,i guess it`s like a turtle shell

[Tiana]

It truly is a beautiful poem, Ron ... A sublime piece of poetry ... I enjoyed reading it very much ...

[wordman]

I really appreciate your visit,hope you had a great new year

[Sami Khalil]

"It`s a special place
down in my soul
where no one else can ever go"

[wordman]

thanks sami for reading this sappy stuff lol

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:).....................