I Close my Eyes

I Close my Eyes

A Poem by wordman
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I close my eyes and i drift away

 

into that magic place where you stay

 

 

In dreams you`ll always be mine

 

I can hold you until the end of time

 

 

I can hear those soft words you used to say

 

when you made love to me in that special way

 

 

In my dreams you will always be mine

 

in my dreams I’ll love you until the end of time

 

 

You still hold the keys to my heart

 

in my dreams we never part...

© 2019 wordman


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A beautiful poem ... Enjoy the gentle soft way of expressing your feelings.

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
In my dreams you will always be mine

in my dreams I’ll love you until the end of time


You still hold the keys to my heart

in my dreams we never part…

Oh to be able to hold onto these kinds of love. Wonderful write, Ron.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you for reading pryde
This is an adorable poem that inspires me to transpose your first two lines into my own unique style which you may keep as your own. The meter is 0/1/0/1 and each rhyme word is exact, it sings.: Sing along:

Drift

I close my eyes.
I drift away
to magic skies
where we may play.


Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

and sings well,thanks
Aethereal

7 Years Ago

You're welcome! Most of the words used here are your words. All I did was make a style transposition.. read more
 wordman

7 Years Ago

yeah, I wish I could I tried it a few years ago they wanted to publish two but I had to pay for it a.. read more
Such a romantic write. I loved.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thanks for reading and friend req my pleasure I am a lost romantic
This one touches my heart because I'm in that place in my dreams.. Thank you Wordman.. you have a way of writing what's in my soul..

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

I appreciate your comment and I hate the fact that your living it it`s hard to lose a loved one mayb.. read more
I close my eyes and i drift away

into that magic place where you stay
I like the opening lines, thank you for sharing the wonderful write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you for reading
You still hold the keys to my heart

in my dreams we never part

Ron as I mention you when my mind is tired of writing my books, I have to come to your page to find peace and harmony for my soul.... you poetry is kind of spiritual healing for me my friend and I love the choice of music...

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

amos I am honered that you stopped in

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 wordman
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