Come Softly my Darling

Come softly my darling

be mine tonight

put your arms around me

hold me tight

Kiss me softly

all through the night

come softly my darling

the world is ours tonight

Take the ribbon from your hair

let`s slip into the night

I promise you darling everything

will be yours tonight

I will take you places

you`ve never been

and if I`m lucky tomorrow night

I will take you again...

Reviews

[sette]

very romantic writing... it speaks volume of what is love all about

[wordman]

thank you sete

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

A fun write....somehow reminds me of the 50s....nicely inked.

[wordman]

it does have that fifties feel,nice to see you

[W R Stowe]

Very nice sentiment wordman

Bill

[wordman]

thank you bill

[W R Stowe]

your welcome wordman

[Myriam]

Very delightful! It's simple and touchy. Very good job..:)

[wordman]

thank you for the visit I guess I am a simple person

[Daydreamer]

The last stanza; magical in it's simplicity!
Very endearing write overall :)

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by

[Daydreamer]

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