You fell in love with a memory

You fell in love with a memory

A Poem by wordman
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You fell in love

with a memory

as you read my poetry

you read my heart


You saw right through me

right from the start

 you read my mind

you read my soul

I touched you,i know


You could feel the love

and you could feel my pain

from the words

my heart would bring


You fell in love

with a memory

wrote from my heart

for you, from me...

© 2017 wordman


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I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!

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This piece is wonderful. written very tasteful and you seem to complete things well. nothing lingering just true beauty from beginning to end..

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

thank you,i rarely send out rr`s
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A gentle and charming piece Ron. Quite lovely.

:) Julie

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 wordman

6 Years Ago

thank you julie
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Beautifully written and touched my soul very much.

Posted 6 Years Ago


 wordman

6 Years Ago

you are too kind,thank you
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Oh how gentle

i love this piece

Poems are always memories that live forever

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There is again a soulful element to this writing. Strange how poetry and reading it can provoke such strong emotions and give us a clue as to the author's character.

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John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

The owners of Writers Cafe should be ashamed of themselves for allowing this clown to keep up these .. read more
tender and romantic. love the idea that triggered it. your poems are always written with feeling and sincerity, if that makes sens.
great song and gorgeous pictures to go with it.

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Woody

6 Years Ago

trust me, it shows.
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Added on January 11, 2015
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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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