You fell in love with a memory

You fell in love

with a memory

as you read my poetry

you read my heart

You saw right through me

right from the start

 you read my mind

you read my soul

I touched you,i know

You could feel the love

and you could feel my pain

from the words

my heart would bring

You fell in love

with a memory

wrote from my heart

for you, from me...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I got a feel for a little of your passion in this piece. Always a good thing to feel a bit of the author in his work. It's just like a painter''s signature on one of their paintings. If there is no signature, you still have a great idea who painted the piece. You read enough of me, you will see what I mean!

[wordman]

you are a true detective my friend ,thanks

[writing mojo]

This has a cardiac cadence that only the truly beaten can understand by the holding of works like these against the open caverns of the chest..speaking of magnetism as rubbing iron will...great piece

[wordman]

I appreciate your visit,and you are right

[SCRIBBLER]

We all one day shall leave, but i'm happy to say that you have left your never fading footprints in the world of poetry. Keep entertaining us.

[wordman]

one day I will learn how to write,thank you for the visit

[Samuel Dickens]

Such poignant words, and accompanied by one of the most beautiful songs ever written.

[wordman]

thanks for the visit Samuel , a great song

[Tom McRoberts]

I really like this piece. There's a really strong imprint a writer leaves behind on any poem, here you joyfully revel in it. Great stuff, keep it up!

[wordman]

well tom,i appreciate your visit my friend

[JayceeC]

This one is sweet. You have great music choices too. I like the older classic pieces you put up with you poems.

[wordman]

music today in general suck,thank you for the visit

[JayceeC]

Now you sound like my husband..lol. I tend to agree but do take notice if a band has great lyrics.

[Adam Adams]

Your stuffs.. poetry're interesting to read with time. Liked the verses / chords / words you choose you add to your poetic dictionary / poetic-page. So soft. Gentle. Moist in love. And.. full of grace. Enjoyed it.

[wordman]

thank you again adams

[Melinda McQueen]

Yes.... your heart is seen in this piece. You wrote with such depth.
A great write.
Thank you for sharing.

[wordman]

thank you melinda

[sereenaoutloud]

great wordman (auto spell always changes it to workman lol) anyway i was saying this is great! Very true and can be taken different ways! for me i take that fear of loving someone and then they change and you are no longer in love with the person now standing in front of you , you are in love with the person that they used to be,,,now only loving their memory!

[wordman]

and it could be but if your really in love it don`t go away
read my comment to bill thats what i wrote it for

[andrew mitchell]

Now I know ,why you are WORDMAN. You wave your words like a sword! top notch stuff!

[wordman]

you are kind Andrew, i just write from the words given to me